-- Use P.A.S. (Problem, Amplify, Solution): you do this for a couple of your 4 mindset shifts but could do it for all)
-- When writing the "Amplify" and "Solution" parts, I find it most intriguing when the writer does this with Personal anecdotes to "Amplify" the problem. This is a way of showing the reader instead of telling the reader what you're going through.
-- By showing through personal anecdotes, you're also taking me as the reader from the dark place you were in, into the light of your epiphany. This gives your epiphanies (in this case, your 4 mental models) much more gravity and meaning.
This all this results in a more powerful message that readers can relate to by way of walking in your shoes. The more a reader can relate, the more hooked they'll be.
Great insights and observations in here that can apply to any creator aspiring to be prolific.
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Key Takeaways and Frameworks:
-- Use P.A.S. (Problem, Amplify, Solution): you do this for a couple of your 4 mindset shifts but could do it for all)
-- When writing the "Amplify" and "Solution" parts, I find it most intriguing when the writer does this with Personal anecdotes to "Amplify" the problem. This is a way of showing the reader instead of telling the reader what you're going through.
-- By showing through personal anecdotes, you're also taking me as the reader from the dark place you were in, into the light of your epiphany. This gives your epiphanies (in this case, your 4 mental models) much more gravity and meaning.
This all this results in a more powerful message that readers can relate to by way of walking in your shoes. The more a reader can relate, the more hooked they'll be.
Hope this is helpful!
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Lovely read. Thanks Hermes 🤙